{"id":6126,"date":"2009-07-15T19:34:49","date_gmt":"2009-07-16T00:34:49","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/law.marquette.edu\/facultyblog\/?p=6126"},"modified":"2009-07-15T20:51:31","modified_gmt":"2009-07-16T01:51:31","slug":"judicial-verbosity-%e2%80%93-it%e2%80%99s-not-easy-being-green","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/law.marquette.edu\/facultyblog\/2009\/07\/judicial-verbosity-%e2%80%93-it%e2%80%99s-not-easy-being-green\/","title":{"rendered":"Judicial Verbosity \u2013 It\u2019s Not Easy Being Green"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignleft size-full wp-image-6137\" style=\"margin-left: 10px; margin-right: 10px;\" title=\"paper-mill\" src=\"http:\/\/law.marquette.edu\/facultyblog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2009\/07\/paper-mill.jpg\" alt=\"paper-mill\" width=\"138\" height=\"104\" srcset=\"https:\/\/law.marquette.edu\/facultyblog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2009\/07\/paper-mill.jpg 800w, https:\/\/law.marquette.edu\/facultyblog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2009\/07\/paper-mill-300x225.jpg 300w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 138px) 100vw, 138px\" \/>An article, \u201cConciseness in Legal Writing,\u201d by my colleague Lisa Hatlen in the June 2009 issue of <em style=\"mso-bidi-font-style: normal;\">Wisconsin Lawyer<\/em> [at 21] got me thinking.\u00a0 My conclusion: I am surprised that \u201cgreen\u201d organizations do not picket at various appellate courthouses in this country, especially in Madison, Wisconsin.\u00a0 A lot of trees are paying a price for judicial verbosity.<\/p>\n<p>It took Judge Benjamin Cardozo about two and a half pages to write <em>Palsgraf v. Long Island Railroad<\/em>, 248 N.Y. 339, 162 N.E. 99 (1928). Less than forty years later, it took Justice Roger Traynor only about one page more to write <em>Greenman v. Yuba Power Products<\/em>, 59 Cal.2d 57, 377 P.2d 897 (1963). Shortly thereafter, here in Wisconsin, it took Justice Bruce Beilfuss only eight pages to write <em>Dippel v. Sciano<\/em>, 37 Wis.2d 443, 155 N.W.2d 55 (1967). All three are landmark opinions in their respective jurisdictions, with the first two having national status. [All references here are to West reporter pages.]\u00a0 <!--more--><\/p>\n<p>In 1978 volume 83 of the second series of the Wisconsin Reporter was published. The average opinion length of Wisconsin Supreme Court cases in that volume was a bit under twelve and a quarter pages. The longest opinion was thirty-nine and a half pages. Twenty years later in 2008, the average length of the court\u2019s opinions in volume 312 of the same reporter was a bit over fifty pages. The longest was eighty-four. On July 14, a unanimous court decided a relatively easy issue, but there were also two concurring opinions going on and on about an issue not even before the court. [2009 WI 78] WHY?!<\/p>\n<p>It is obvious that the advent of computers and word processing has had an impact on the length of judicial opinions today. <span style=\"mso-spacerun: yes;\">\u00a0<\/span>Now, a jurist need not worry about asking an administrative assistant to retype significant portions of an opinion after editing.<span style=\"mso-spacerun: yes;\">\u00a0 <\/span>The jurist need not proof read various revised copies of an opinion or ask a law clerk to do so.<span style=\"mso-spacerun: yes;\">\u00a0 <\/span>Now it is easy for a jurist to pull quotes from half a dozen or more authorities that support his or her position, instead of one.<span style=\"mso-spacerun: yes;\">\u00a0 <\/span>With computerized legal research, the quoted material can be pulled from its original source and easily placed into the opinion \u2013 no retyping or proof reading involved.<\/p>\n<p>Nevertheless, today\u2019s appellate jurist should be able to make a concise statement of involved facts; state the issue or issues posed; and, apply old law or fashion new law to resolve the case in a lot less space than they are taking.<span style=\"mso-spacerun: yes;\">\u00a0 <\/span>Sometimes one comes away from examining a court\u2019s advance sheets with the impression that the various jurists on the court are playing a form of \u201ccan you top this\u201d as to opinion page length: \u201cMine was seventy pages long, yours was only sixty.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Verbosity reduction would be a boon to the bar.<span style=\"mso-spacerun: yes;\">\u00a0 <\/span>The cost to clients for legal research could be reduced.<span style=\"mso-spacerun: yes;\">\u00a0 <\/span>It would also ease the minds of law faculty members who like to have their students read and analyze cases other than the highly edited ones that appear in casebooks. <span style=\"mso-spacerun: yes;\">\u00a0<\/span>This is especially so in Wisconsin due to the diploma privilege.<span style=\"mso-spacerun: yes;\">\u00a0 <\/span>Professors seeking tenure could avoid concern about \u201cassigns too much outside work\u201d appearing on their evaluations by students.<\/p>\n<p>Now some may say it is strange for the co-author of a two volume treatise on punitive damages to be a critic of the length of other peoples writing.<span style=\"mso-spacerun: yes;\">\u00a0 <\/span>That work, however, has twenty-four chapters and attempts to analyze various aspects of the law in each jurisdiction in the country.<span style=\"mso-spacerun: yes;\">\u00a0 <\/span>Law firms and lawyers need not buy it or study annual supplements or chapter revisions.<span style=\"mso-spacerun: yes;\">\u00a0 <\/span>They do, however, have to review advance sheets of opinions of the courts in their jurisdictions to stay abreast of changes in the law and attempt to understand those changes.<span style=\"mso-spacerun: yes;\">\u00a0 <\/span>Jurists should follow the advice often given to speakers at luncheons or dinners:<span style=\"mso-spacerun: yes;\">\u00a0 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