Cut It Out
Know how and when to cut words from your sentences during the editing process? Here are some links to help.
Bryan Garner’s April 2014 ABA Journal magazine article provides a good list of unnecessary phrases. Garner recommends “axing” words like “herein” from legal documents.
WordRake is an editing program that allows you to upload a document and receive line edits on concision and clarity. This blog tested the program on some sample Supreme Court authority with favorable results. Also check out the WordRake blog for editing advice.
One easy starting point for editing is to look for and eliminate “there is” and “it is” from your sentences. These phrases add meaningless fluff at the most important point of a sentence—the beginning—and often signal the passive voice and nominalizations. This blog suggests ways to streamline your writing by eliminating “there is” and “it is” (or the past tense version) or phrases like “given the fact that” or “in light of the fact that.”